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An Unsuitable Man, Inara, Brian/Justin, Firefly/QaF crossover


Inara (Firefly) and Brian/Justin (QaF)
Planet Ariel, set during Firefly
Rated NC 17
Words: 614
Inara returns to her mentor and the unsuitable man she once loved, Master Justin of the Ariel Companion House, who gives her very unusual comfort and hope for winning her stubborn new love.
Includes the prompt "Danger zone" for [info]tamingthemuse

This quirky piece was partially inspired by a desire to write Inara and Justin, as well as Brian/Justin in a futuristic setting. I'm doing it in three short pieces as part of my extra Taming prompts.


Ariel, Alliance Core Worlds, Companion House

"Lao pung yo, nee can chi lai hun yo jing shen," Master Justin said, breezing into the medical bay.

He was wearing a yellow silk kimono with bright red flowers, his slender body moving like a dancer, face eager and intelligent. His youthful appearance didn't jive with running the most prestigious core world’s pleasure house and the rumor he was over five hundred years old.

Inara tried to remain composed despite the fact she was sitting with her legs spread in stirrups, the pink, plump folds of her sex exposed.

He patted her arm. "Blushing, meimei?"

Inara felt that familiar tight feeling in her stomach of attraction, despite knowing he was a lover of men. Justin was an experienced courtesan and had pleasured both men and women before he'd assumed rule of this house. Now he shared himself with only a few special students, all male.

She sighed, hoping he'd never guess the real reason she's run away from his house. "I haven't changed so much from your servant girl," she said.

"No." Justin bent close and kissed her and then squeezed her thigh gently, watching her response.

It was part of testing, but he would never be someone she could be indifferent to.

Her lips parted but then she sagged a moment later, knowing that the tease was only the examination, not real desire on his part.

"So weary after your year of wandering, my Inara," Justin whispered. His fingers dipped in a bowl of honey and he rubbed it over her, spreading her like a delicate fan.

Her head fell back and she regulated her breathing. Enjoy. This is art, like cooking, like calligraphy, dancing and painting.

"I brought disgrace on your house," she said, eyes falling from his gentle blue gaze. She knew she should be concentrating on the body now. On whether he wanted her to come...or not come. Reading his signals. But--

"Yu bun duh!"

"It's not stupid. I'm responsible--"

"And so you took responsibility and now you wander in that gos se ship."

"Serenity is home, as much as your house was home." Pain knotted in her chest. Mal is home. She pushed him aside, practiced, as she'd once been practiced in pushing aside another unsuitable man.

"You're in love!" Justin gave her an enthusiastic kiss and then helped her off the medical bed. "Come to my rooms. We'll share chai and secrets."

Inara reached for a gown and closed it between her full breasts, pulling her long hair out so it fell down her shoulders.

Justin smoothed it. "I want to paint you, meimei. Paint you on the edge of pleasure."

A year ago she would have given him that, let herself navigate the tangled danger zone of a relationship that only lived in her head and then retreated to seclusion for days in the aftermath.

She took his hand and smiled almost naturally. "He's unsuitable."

Soft, "Surely more suitable than I was?"

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Translations from Firefly Chinese Net:

Lao pung yo, nee can chi lai hun yo jing shen: you're looking wonderful, old friend.
meimei: little sister.
yu bun duh: stupid.
gos se: crap

An Unsuitable Man, Part Two




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Very interesting
[info]chiara1
2008-05-08 07:11 am UTC (link)
I enjoyed Firefly for the short time it was aired. Inara is a captivating character and I look forward to more of this story. This Justin has a hint of Spike in Kept. Very interesting. Thank you, thank you.


Chiara

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Re: Very interesting
[info]jans_intentions
2008-05-08 03:07 pm UTC (link)
I loved Firefly. I felt almost as much pain over it's cancellation as I did Buffy/Angel.

Yes, this Justin has a lot in common with Spike in Kept. It seems the caring, powerful male courtesan is something I like to write.

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[info]furriboots
2008-05-08 12:17 pm UTC (link)
Very unusual premise. I enjoyed it although I have not seen Firefly and so lack the background.

I am interested to see what you are going to do with Justin (and eventually Brian) in this world.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:09 pm UTC (link)
I hope you'll go buy Firefly. You guys would LOVE it! :bounces: It's only half a season, so it wouldn't take long, plus cowboy stuff.

I think a bit Kept with Justin. Brian...dark, dangerous. You'll see. *wink*

Edited at 2008-05-08 03:09 pm UTC

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[info]aschicca
2008-05-08 01:22 pm UTC (link)
Firefly is the only show of Joss' that I haven't watched so I actually don't even know who Inara is (though I think Mal is the character Adam Baldwin portrayed isn't he? *is clueless*).

So even if reading about Inara is like reading about an original character for me, I have to say I enjoyed the reading and I found it very intriguing. I shall wait to see how Brian will fit into this world :)

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:13 pm UTC (link)
You should look into where you can d/l Firefly. I liked it better than Buffy, but it may be that the writing in Buffy season six on kind of...mmmm.

Mal was portrayed by Nathan Fillion, whom you may not know, but he's doing some interesting, big stuff lately, so probably that will change. He was born in the same city I was.

I'm perfectly happy if you read Inara/the Firefly verse as original. I will try to flesh it out so no one has to do so. Fun!

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(no subject) - [info]harka, 2008-05-08 06:40 pm UTC
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[info]agneson9
2008-05-08 02:29 pm UTC (link)
I just discovered firefly for myself last month. Great timing.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh, then you get it. I love Firefly, so yay!

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[info]vikingprincess
2008-05-08 02:30 pm UTC (link)
I can hardly wait for more. This looks as though it will be wonderful!

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:15 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon. Yes, I hope it'll be erotic and insightful. Plus I get to play a little with different forms of erotica in just over 500 word prompts.

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[info]krakrakra
2008-05-08 02:31 pm UTC (link)
yay... something new.
i never really got a chance to watch Firefly, but i guess i should give it a try:)
what can i say, the first chapter... it's intriguing as always i'm definitely looking forward to see the next part...
your creativity continues to amaze me :)

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:15 pm UTC (link)
It would make me very happy if a few readers discovered this wonderful series through this piece, so yay!

I'm glad you are intrigued and thank you.

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[info]zaipixie
2008-05-08 03:00 pm UTC (link)
TIME damnit! I neeeeeed time to read this! *sobs*

This is a total pointless comment, but I just wanted you to know that I'm chomping at the bit to get started on this!

*crappiest Arnold imitation ever*
I'll Be Back!

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 03:16 pm UTC (link)
Love your icon.

Don't worry, I'll be doing this for a little while in short 500 word bits. Catch it when you can.

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[info]autumn_screams
2008-05-08 03:40 pm UTC (link)
After reading this, I came to a conclusion: I NEED/HAVE to watch Firefly because of that wonderful teaser.
I've loved you for Noir, Apple, Bali and...actually all your fics, so I'm doubly excited over this new one.
Thank you so much.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Yay on wanting to see Firefly! I know you are going to love the show, so that's great.

Thanks for taking a peek. More next week!

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[info]msv713
2008-05-08 03:58 pm UTC (link)
Interesting story. I never saw Firefly, so I don't the characters, but I do like what you've done and interested to see what's next.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:27 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you are. I think it won't matter so much about watching it. Just read it as you would Noir or one of my futuristics.

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[info]velvetwhip
2008-05-08 04:40 pm UTC (link)
I don't know a darn thing about Firefly, as you know, but I think this is a nifty story. I don't know why, but it did not show up on my f-list, so I did not find it until now. I am so glad I did, though, because it is very intriguing so far. More great work from a writer whose work always impresses me!


Gabrielle

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:28 pm UTC (link)
I put it up right before bedtime here! So that's probably why you missed it.

I'm glad you like it. A BTVS character will be cameoed in future.

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[info]eliriel1
2008-05-08 04:44 pm UTC (link)
I am interested in read more of this.I never saw Firefly, but I read another fic ,not a crossover,( QAF characters are in Firefly verse ), and I loved it.It's different , though.But I love that idea of a male courtesan ( and more that he was my baby ).Make things more interesting.
See ya,
Liri

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:29 pm UTC (link)
I love the idea of Justin the male courtesan too. It suits him! Glad you like it. xx

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[info]lucsmom
2008-05-08 05:10 pm UTC (link)
I never watched Firefly, but I'll have to check it out. I always meant to, but forgot. I like the premise of this and Inara is very interesting. I'm looking forward to this story.

Kim

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:29 pm UTC (link)
You would enjoy Firefly. There are very few truly GOOD shows and this was one of them.

I'm glad you are looking forward to more.

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[info]duffy_60
2008-05-08 05:22 pm UTC (link)
Oh, you beauty!!

I loved Firefly, and now you've paired two wonderful characters.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:30 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you know Firefly. Yes, I thought Justin and Inara a wonderful pairing of friends!

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[info]pyewackets_paws
2008-05-08 05:25 pm UTC (link)
I actually didn't get into Firefly until long after it was off the air. Once I bought and watched the box set I was hooked (funny, same with QAF). I'm always on the look out for good Firefly fic these days, so I'm really excited about this.

I can already tell that I'm going to like the kind, wise, Companion!Justin, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes us. ^^

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:33 pm UTC (link)
Yes, isn't Justin *perfect* for the role of wise Companion. I find it very sexy, that he's experienced in giving pleasure to all and all the geisha like and deadly arts of the Companion. Yum!

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[info]michele659
2008-05-08 05:29 pm UTC (link)
I like Firefly- I have seen most of it and got the DVD of the series so I can watch the rest. I love that you've combined the two shows,especially with this premise.
Justin as the courtesan master-that sounds very hot. I like the relationship he has with Inara here and I'm looking forward to seeing how their lives and loves interweave.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:34 pm UTC (link)
I think he's going to be smoking hot in this one, along with Inara and dark, dangerous Brian, when he shows up. *wink*

Glad you like. I like the 500 word limit. It's easy and means I can play without strain or being away from my longer stories.

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[info]litlemspowerful
2008-05-08 05:35 pm UTC (link)
Very sensual and enticing. I like your approach of Justin as Spike from Kept. I've always liked my boys dark and daring. I'm excited for the next chapter.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:39 pm UTC (link)
I didn't know you'd heard of Kept, but yes, that was the fic that made me kind of well known in Buffy. I stuck Spike in a Kimono and Shoganite world as a courtesan. *wink*

Justin will be very sexy in this role. I'm so glad you like it. xx

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[info]kimberbaby
2008-05-08 05:38 pm UTC (link)
I was just introduced to Firefly earlier this year so I am very excited about this new idea of yours. I always wondered about Inara's past, I suspect lots of heartbreak and drama. This should be a nice challenge for you, Jan, you are a master storyteller. And, Justin being 500 years old--hee, and still looking twink-like--priceless! *claps*

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 05:40 pm UTC (link)
I've often wondered if Randy has a cracked mirror somewhere, as in Dorian Gray. *wink*

I'm glad you like the idea and are familiar with Firefly. Yay!

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[info]plasticine_star
2008-05-08 05:55 pm UTC (link)
Very nice. I like the idea of Justin not just as a courtesan, but an expert on both men and women, that's different and intriguing...

I never watched firefly but Inara seems like a great character, a good match with Justin, sort of a sophisticated Daphne.

Can't wait to see how you insert Brian into this adventure in pleasure.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:44 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I like the idea of Justin in control, powerful, and yet, maybe vulnerable to that one special man. Well, you know. *wink*

Brian will appear sooner or later, yep. I like how I've envisioned him for this verse.

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[info]sheira66
2008-05-08 06:39 pm UTC (link)
WOW I don't even watch Firefly and I found this extremely HOT!
hugs
sheira

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:45 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad. I just had a request for the one next week and it might be even hotter. *wink*

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[info]forsomeone
2008-05-08 07:10 pm UTC (link)
I don't know what to do with this. LOL. Having two of my favorite fandoms colide like this is throwing me. I can't wait to see what you do with it. It's sure to be interesting. You're one of my favorite authors. I know you'll be able to make this world seem real. Very good so far and very intriguing.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:46 pm UTC (link)
It's so funny you like them both. We are an odd bunch, probably.

I hope you'll enjoy, it'll be unusual for both, probably.

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[info]melancholia_clo
2008-05-08 07:59 pm UTC (link)
I don't know Firefly sadly :(
But like always,I'm attracted and entangled by your works :)

I'm pretty curious about the next developments.

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:46 pm UTC (link)
You don't really need to, I don't think. Just relax and watch the weekly bits.

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[info]kauanna
2008-05-08 09:28 pm UTC (link)
Hum.... That's nice, jan. You really got me curious here! Good thing : )

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:51 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad. It's just a little bit of free playing for me. Expect the unexpected!

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[info]vinniebatman
2008-05-08 09:41 pm UTC (link)
Ooh... very intriguing setting and premise.

I adore it!

...Even if I'm more of a Mal/Simon person... *grins*

~Alice~

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:51 pm UTC (link)
Yes, I wrote some of M/S on request ages ago.

I'm glad you adore. xx

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[info]ckrazykell4
2008-05-08 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Is her unsuitable man Brian?

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:52 pm UTC (link)
No, it's Mal, a character from Firefly.

Brian is Justin's unsuitable man, as you'll see. But isn't he always?

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[info]wouldbedorothy
2008-05-08 09:55 pm UTC (link)
I never loved Firefly quite as much as I wanted to, but I do have a fondness for it. I've not read fic, except for a few Rayne oneshots, but I always thought Mal and Inara were yummy.

Really nice job setting up a lot in very few words.

I'm not sure how I will read this one. I may skip around, although that sounds rude. I think I just can't read smut involving women. No fem slash, and I'm pretty sure no het, either. It's not a lack of interest... I have a violent reaction (kicked in around paragraph three, lol) that I can't really explain.

I just wanted you to know I haven't left you :)

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[info]jans_sanctuary
2008-05-08 10:53 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the setting for it.

Oh, read what bits you like, I don't care. I wouldn't assume you'd deserted me. I just need to do more than always the same long fics and the same m/m sex all the time, much as I love it.

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